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(If you would like, please listen to this song as you read: www.youtube.com/user/okanokumo… It helps set the peaceful atmosphere I was attempting to portray in the text.)

If the birds soaring though in the tangerine sky looked directly below them, they would find me resting on the edge of a cliff with my feet dangling off the edge. They'd sing my lover and I a melody which neither of us understand, but enjoy none the less. Waves crash below us, but I promised to keep him safe. Nothing bad would happen as long as we were together. The summer breeze kisses my face while the last remaining rays of sunlight reach out to me, casting a soothing, golden glow. "Promise you won't let it hurt me?" The person sitting next to me asks, peering down at the ocean below with fear written across is face. My partner is very different from I, yet in an oddly captivating and beautiful way. His erratic behavior always keeps me on my toes, but maybe that's what I like about us. Everyday is a new beginning and a new love for us to share. "Yes darling." I say, keeping my voice as silky smooth as his jade skin. "I promise." He squeezes my hand slightly, making me smile at the way his abnormal fingers fit perfectly in between my own. The grass tickles my hand while he hardly feels it through his gloves. The gloves he refuses to ever remove. "I love you Zim." Now it's his turn to smile as he moves closer to me. I gladly cuddle him. "I love you too." My fiance sighs dreamily. My eyes fall on to the glimmering ring he wears, the one I gave him only months ago. A powder pink blush rises to my cheeks at the thought of us finally being married. It's been exactly eight years since we both accepted our feelings towards one another, and now I couldn't wait to make our love official at last. I sigh a content sigh as we both gaze at the sunset, simply enjoying the company of each other. "Dib?" I look to Zim once more. "Will...Will we be together forever?" He asks in a bashful tone, one I rarely hear him use. I show him a warm grin and delicately introduce our lips for the thousandth time before echoing the words, "Forever."
After writing my ZaDr slave story, I figured I should write a super fluffy one, so here it is! I don't know why, but I like writing from Dib's perspective. Anyways, hope you enjoy!
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:icondragongirl617:
 . . . and then they make love on the beach. :D Cliche, but compulsory ;p
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:iconin-love-with-zadr:
Yay~! That would be pretty awesome! Man, now that I look at this story it is SO short XD
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:icondragongirl617:
Sometimes little short stories are the best - less chance of cocking up with the writing half-way throug, as I fear is happening to me :(

Do you to write more stuff?
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:iconin-love-with-zadr:
I hate when that happens. I've actually lost a few stories that way. Everything just seems so chalky, and doesn't flow right.

Actually I have one very awful story finished and I'm currently working on another one that is so far below average. I don't know if I should post the first one or not because the way I wrote it is just....bad. D:
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:icondragongirl617:
Hmm . . . Is it just me or do stories seem really bad to the author, yet other people say they're really good? I've been working on mine for ages, but I keep having to go back and edit just so things run smoothly - and I'm still not happy with it!
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:iconin-love-with-zadr:
Do you write ZaDr stories as well? And I am actually proud of some of my stories (like a 2813 word gore one that I did for school) but this one is just making me wonder where the hell my writing skills went. Stupid write's block -_-

Oh! I have an idea! Maybe we could send each other one of our stories to edit/give feedback on? :D You don't have to if you don't want to, just a suggestion.
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:icondragongirl617:
Aye; I'm currently writing my very first multi chapter fanfic, and yes, it is ZADR. Its called Blue Lips and I would love feedback. And I am more than happy to give you in depth feedback on your stories as well. You may notice that I always comment when I'm faving.
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:iconin-love-with-zadr:
I really love when people comment. It is just so great! :D Anywho, how many chapters is your story? I can simply send you mine through note since it's quite short if you want. I would love it if someone looked over it before I decided to post it, although I find it rather bland.
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Art---Freak Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awe! This is great ! keep up the great work okay !
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